The Bully
February 21st, 2007
“Oh no!” Sam breathed, ” Please, Please, Please don’t let them see me” However it was too late for that. Jack was strutting towards him with the manner of a cat who had a gallon of cream in sight. “Ah, there’s my punchbag,” Jack said arrogantly. “Aren’t you even more flighty than usual today Sammie?”
How could he know? Thought Sam, how could he know about mum?
Of course he doesn’t know, Sam reassured himself. He’s always like that.
Esther
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1. Cornhill | February 21st, 2007 at 4:20 pm
Heya it’s Hannah. i liked your story. Maybe you could do more next time. I know you like writing!!
2. June | February 21st, 2007 at 5:07 pm
This is a good story, but it doesn’t make much sense. What is it about his mum? Write a sequel to peice it together, maybe?
3. se-ember | February 21st, 2007 at 6:33 pm
hey there easter egg*
that was a good start to a story but was not quite sure what happened in the middle and the end.
a sequal would be a great idea and you are really good at these things so you could do some more!*
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