The Burgled Motor Home
November 21st, 2007
I was driving down a country road when I saw an old motor home and pulled over to see it. The door was wide open so I walked in. It smelt of cheap wine and stale beer.
I looked to the right and saw there were smashed wine bottles and lots of blood. I heard a weird noise coming from the toilet. There was screaming. There was a click - the sound of a cassette tape being chewed up. I looked to my left and noticed the TV, CD player and football trophies had been stolen. There was one left; it was a maths trophy. There was a pair of rubber gloves which were covered in blood.
I dashed back outside. My new shiny Red Vauxhall Corsa had been stolen and there were tyre marks leading back to Aberdeen.
Liam
Cornhill Primary School
Entry Filed under: Cornhill, Schools, Search Inside, Writer in Residence
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1. Academy | November 23rd, 2007 at 9:55 am
Arite Kenzie it Owzer. Nice story
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