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The Business Man Mystery

November 21st, 2007

It was a windy and thundery night. There was a bright red Ferrari outside and the driveway was made from pink granite. There was an expensive mansion right behind the driveway. I walked up to the door and noticed that the lock was wonky and had dents on the handle. There was a hammer lying on the ground. The door was half open and I went in. The hall was very big with brightly coloured walls and a table with a very expensive vase on top.

I went into another room. It was the kitchen, and it was very big and had a very large space. The fridge-freezer was on the wall next to the sink. There was a big double oven and a table in the middle.There was a business card with contact details on it and there was also a letter turned upside down. I turned it over and it read ”Hi partner, I really hate you for what you did yesterday, not selling the business for 43 million pounds . I HATE YOU. I don’t want to talk to you ever again.” I put the letter down and walked to the door opposite the table.

It looked like the living room. It was the living room. The sofa was very large and made from leather. There was a plasma screen TV in front of the sofa. There was a big glass coffee table to the rght and to the left there was a staircase.

Up the staircase was a trail of blood that started at the foot of the stairs and went into a room at the end of the landing. I opened the door and saw a black bed with the the curtains closed. I opened the curtains and saw the blood going under the bed.

Tonitia

Cornhill Primary School    

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