The Deadly Farmer
December 11th, 2007
I was walking home with my friend from school and we passed a farm. We have walked past this farm before but it seemed different today, we heard a long and loud SCREACH! We jumped. My friend walked slowly towards the door… I followed her. There was a drilling sound. I walked into the living room.
IT STANK! phew! There was a picture hanging on the wall. “1st prize,” it said. There was a picture of the farmer with a fat pig with a blue ribbion on it which was standing next to him. I shivered. My friend swapped the salt and pepper around. (They were shaped as two roosters.) I sighed. “Whats wrong”, she said? ^CRASH^ we jumped again, this time my friend shivered.
I walked further along the living room and out to the hall. Their was a wooden plaque with a bulls head on it. I screamed, my friend screamed. The door knob to a room was shaking. (The room with the noises!)
Jade
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1. Jenny | December 11th, 2007 at 9:43 pm
Hello Jade
I enjoyed all the dscriptions in your story - I thought you set the scene very well. I hope there wasn’t a bull in the room- hope you write more so I can find out!
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