The Door of Death
October 11th, 2007
Can you solve the mystery?
A red car stood in a field near Heathrow Airport with a bright white caravan attached to it. The car was a 5-door Vauxhall Corsa. Near the drivers door there was a very deep dent. The caravan looked in fairly good condition. As I walked to the back of the I saw a bandage lying on the ground. It had dark red blood on it.
When I went inside, I saw a small kitchen in front of me. A strong smell of fish and chips made me go in. On the floorI saw some chips and fishes lying around with a pan beside them. I went through the kitchen to the living room.
The tv was left on, on channel CNN. Beside it I saw a small light brown envelope saying “To Mr and Mrs Smith”. I looked inside and there was a letter. “I’ll arrive at Heathrow Airport at 5:00pm. Be there to pick me up”. I continued going through the living room and I saw 3 bedrooms in front of me.
A sound came frome one of the bedrooms. I walked into it. I saw a framed photo of a married couple beside a double bed. There were clothes lying around.
I heard a noise coming from the kitchen I ran in panic to the kitchen. There was a blue digital clock saying “5:00 o’clock pm, 5:00 o’clock pm”. Then I heard another noise. Someone was knocking on the door.
By Parham St Peters School
Entry Filed under: Schools, St Peter's RC
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1. Mrs Martin | November 25th, 2007 at 10:12 pm
You have put in a lot of clues and built up the tension. I would have been scared to go in if I had seen a bandage with blood. It sounds as though the people left in a hurry because they did not finish their tea of fish and chips. Maybe the person who is knocking at the door wonders what you are doing in the caravan. Well done Parham.
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