The Enormous Crematorium
November 4th, 2007
One Monday night there was a man called Bob. This man went out drinking with his friends every Monday night. The pub that Bob and his friends went to was in Hazelhead, next to an enormous building called the Hazelhead crematorium. One of Bob’s friends suddenly said “Let’s go into the crematorium.” Then Bob said, “No, I’d better not I’m late on getting home as it is. My wife will be worried sick if im not home soon.” “We won’t be long we just need to see a quick thing.” “OK but I will be leaving after about 5 minutes.” “Sure,” said Bill.
So they nipped next door. The gates were locked when they got there so Bob and his friends set off to go when out of the corner of his eye he could see one his friends entering the crematorium doors and walked up to the bright red seats and sat down. Then all of a sudden there was a noise coming from behind the dark red curtain so Bob walked up to it when……
THE END






1 Comment Add your own
1. Jenny | December 11th, 2007 at 9:35 pm
Oh no - your dramatic ending makes me think a tragedy is about to take place!
Please write more so I know what happened!
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