Youngsters’ Forum

The Famous Flat

November 21st, 2007

It was a bright sunny day and I was about to go and visit my friend in the flat near my house, but on the third floor I saw the door on the left hand-side of me wide open with the hinges broken off. I walked up to the door and peeked inside. I could see a smashed light bulb on the floor and a football sat in one corner of the lobby.

I walked into the living room and looked around the door again to make sure nobody was there. In the room I could see a big screen tv in the bottom right hand corner of the room. It was turned on but no sound came from it. The window in front of me was smashed but there was no glass on the floor so I looked out the window and I could just see little bits of glass in the grass. I turned around and looked at the wall where a wedding photo hung. Beside the photo there was a huge trophy case filled with silver ice skating trophies and medals with the name Sasha Cohen on all of them.

I looked around again and I could see a notebook with writing for a holiday on the black, leather sofa. Then I heard a banging sound coming from the lobby so I went back into the lobby and I listened again for the banging. The noise got louder everytime I took a step and I saw where the noise was coming from. It was coming from a closet. I took little baby steps because I was getting really scared but then the noise stopped when I stood in front of the closet. I then suddenly turned the handle, opened the door and then I VANISHED !   Dun Dun Dun

 By Caitlin       

Entry Filed under: Cornhill, Schools, Writing