Youngsters’ Forum

The Flat

October 2nd, 2007

Who do you think might have been called out to this flat, and what conclusion might they reach? 

It was a wet and thundery day. I was wondering why I got called out here so I walked down the corridor of the flat. Then I realised the door at the end of the corridor was broken There were bits of wood everywhere.

Behind it was a massive grey rock, but it was strange I would have thought the neighbours heard the trashing of the door. So I pushed the door aside and went in. It was breezy and some strange flickering white stuff was flying around the living room, it was because of the breezy wind coming from somewhere in the flat, the pieces of paper looked like homework. One piece of paper floated right beside my feet and it was THE SUN. For some strange reason one half of the headline was ripped off, it said….BUSTED.

When I turned round the corner of the living room  I saw a load of golden ice skating tropohies and certificates but the centre trophy was missing. I heard a noise in the kitchen. It was coming from the answer machine. “Hi, it’s me. Have you seen the headlines of THE SU*N? Be prepared, just in case.”

Directly opposite was a broken window and the middle shiny, golden statue was outside and someone had tried to smash the window with it to get out. In the corner of the living room was a TV stand but no TV on top of it. The wires were in a huge jumble behind it.

By Eden. St. Peter’s School

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