The Flat
October 11th, 2007
Can you guess what sort of person lives in this house.
The Flat
It was a wet and thundery day. I was wondering why I got called out here so I walked down the corridor of the flat. Then I realised the door at the end of the corridor was broken. There were bits of wood everywhere.
Behind it was a massive grey rock but it was strange I would have thought that the neighbours heard it. So I pushed the door aside and went in. It was breezy and some strange flickering white stuff was flying around the living room it was because of the breezy wind coming from somewhere in the flat, the pieces of paper looked like homework. One piece of paper floated right beside my feet and it was THE SUN. For some strange reason one half of the headline was ripped of it said…………. BUSTED.
When I turned round the of the living room I saw a load of golden ice trophies and certificates but the centre trophy was missing. I heard a noise in the kitchen. It was coming from the answer machine . “Hi it’s me. Have you seen the headlines of THE SUN? Be prepared just in case.”
Directly opposite was a broken window and the middle shiny, golden statue was out side some one had tried to smashed the window with it to get out. in the corner of the living room was TV stand but no TV on top of it. The wires were in a huge jumble behind it.
By Eden
By Eden St.Peter’s
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1. Mrs Martin | November 25th, 2007 at 10:08 pm
Good writing, Eden. You have described a crime scene and the criminal has escaped with the TV. Did they think about stealing the trophy after they used it to break the window? I’m puzzled by the rock - but perhaps that is a clue and I need to think a bit more about it. Well done!
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