Comments on: The Jouney of the Chivalry of the Avenger http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/the-jouney-of-the-chivalry-of-the-avenger The Reading Bus Blog features the writing of the community of Reading Bus users in Aberdeen, Scotland. Wed, 23 May 2012 02:51:05 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Moira http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/the-jouney-of-the-chivalry-of-the-avenger#comment-5556 Moira Mon, 30 Apr 2007 20:07:58 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=558#comment-5556 Hi Matthew I loved your piece of writing. It is very hard for children to write consistently well from the beginning to the end of the story. I think you have managed this very well showing that you are a very mature writer. I would love to read some more of your stories so please write another blog soon. Hi Matthew

I loved your piece of writing. It is very hard for children to write consistently well from the beginning to the end of the story. I think you have managed this very well showing that you are a very mature writer.
I would love to read some more of your stories so please write another blog soon.

]]> By: Jenny http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/the-jouney-of-the-chivalry-of-the-avenger#comment-5548 Jenny Mon, 30 Apr 2007 19:54:45 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=558#comment-5548 Hi Matthew I think you have a talent for writing - great descriptions, you build up the atmosphere really well and your writing seems very real. Don't forget about paragraphs - it makes it easier for the reader. Would love to read some more of your writing. Hi Matthew
I think you have a talent for writing - great descriptions, you build up the atmosphere really well and your writing seems very real.
Don’t forget about paragraphs - it makes it easier for the reader.
Would love to read some more of your writing.

]]> By: Megan P7 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/the-jouney-of-the-chivalry-of-the-avenger#comment-4557 Megan P7 Fri, 27 Apr 2007 09:20:16 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=558#comment-4557 cool wow amazing wicked fantabulistic really good cool
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