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The Mansion

November 7th, 2007

There was a big white mansion with a lot of windows. On the third floor one of them was open. The detective walked in the mansion. He smelt soap and heard water running; it came from upstairs.

He looked on the wall and saw a picture. It was a dinner party. There was a long table with a man and a woman standing up holding wine glasses. There was also a butler with them.

The detective started to walk up the stairs. As he was getting near the third floor, the sound of running water became louder. It came from the bathroom. As he opened the door, the bath tub overflowed and water was everywere.

The window was open. There was no showerhead. The detective  looked out the window. The showerhead was outside, on top of a bush it looked like some one had pulled it off.                         

  Callum                                  

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