The Mansion
November 21st, 2007
Guess who lives here ?
The house cost well over £1000000. There were 5 bedrooms and 2 bathrooms, 1 kitchen and 1 living room.
In the living room there was a black sette and a black fire place and on it there was a vase of roses and congraulations cards.
In the middle of the living room there was a glass table on it was a book of wedding dresses on the front cover.
On the black and red what looked freshly painted walls was a photo of a lady and man on it hugging.
In the master bedroom there was a four poster bed and the quilt was so straight it looked like it was ironed and there was a dressing table with make-up, straightners, curlers and a hairdryer.
Across the room a bright ray of sunshine shone to reveal confetti lying on the ground.
by lauren duncan and danielle hunter
Entry Filed under: Schools, St Machar Primary
2 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | November 21st, 2007 at 9:15 pm
Some great descriptions - I could really picture this mansion. There are a lot of clues about a wedding? My favourite description is “across the room a bright ray of sunshine shone to reveal confetti”. Please write more!
2. Mrs Hendry | November 30th, 2007 at 1:59 pm
I really liked you description of the house. Great choice of adjectives. Well done girls!
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