The Mirage
November 2nd, 2007
The Mirage 2006 may 1st at 5:00pm As I walked up the bumpy hill to find a house glowing in the dark, it’s strange because there was not a house there yesterday. So I went and I could smell something disgusting, “pheeeeewwwweeeeee”, fart spray, as I went to hold my nose I could see something glittering at the corner of my eye, what ever was glittering was coming from the living room. As I walked into the living room I stepped on something mushy chewing gum. It was reddish with a hint of green. So my guess is that they never chewed it for long. The glittering thing was a jokers set. The T.V. was still they were watching the snow show; I started to get worried about the people returning so I made a runner. By Callum Chalmers at p7
Entry Filed under: Donbank, Schools, Writer in Residence, Writing
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1. Jenny | November 8th, 2007 at 9:53 pm
A mystery - not sure quite what has happened here! I liked the expression “something glittering at the corner of my eye”.
You have left some great clues but I hope you write some more so I can work out what is going on!
2. silver snake[AkA Robbie] | February 14th, 2008 at 3:03 pm
The best story I’v ever read! Absolutly amazing.I hope you saw through ”that” mirage.
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