The Mysterious Mansion
November 21st, 2007
It was a damp,bleak day.The mansion up ahead was engulfed in dark,gloomy storm clouds.Every few minutes you could hear a flash of lightning strike the enormous building.
As you went into the living room you could see cobwebs in every corner of the mysterious room. On the living room table in the centre of the room there was a radio playing the top 10 hits.
Then all of a sudden the radio’s music changed into a really creepy song as if my magic. Also on the table there were bags filled to the top with sweets.
In the kichen there were lots of pictures of families dressed up in lots of different costumes,all looking happy except for one. One that picture was the year 2006, last year.
Whilst you went upstairs the stairs creaked when you took a step forward.On the wall of the lobby there was a note saying I’m out with mates be back at midnight love Janet.
When you go into the bedroom the door creaks open. In the bedroom all of the light were flickering suspiciously. All across the floor toys were scattered as if nobody wanted you to come in. On the bed there were joke books with pages ripped out.
In the downstairs library books were everywhere,on the table,on the desks, even all over the floor. On each table there were candles burning brightly. Then suddenly they all went out. Leaving the room in terrifying darkness!
Ashleigh






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1. Kirstin | December 21st, 2007 at 11:05 am
it was great lots of detail was you in a rich house with the people went trick or treating on halloween great story
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