THE SMALL COTTAGE
November 21st, 2007
It was a dark cold night. As I walked in the small cottage door, I saw that it was a poor house but there were lottery tickets ripped up. There was also one on the table with the winning ticket on the back of it. On the table I also saw a catalogue of homes. The title was “Homes for You”. I heard a loud noise saying “YOU HAVE WON £2000.” I noticed it was the small t.v. in the corner on channel 1.
I smelt men’s deodorant all around the room.There was also an Aberdeen football calendar on the wall, saying Saturday 3rd November 2007, with a picture of Scott Sevrin. Beside the picture was a little football iron board still out.
On a little chair there was men’s gel and scratch cards scattered. I saw on the wall that there was an Aberdeen Football border with a little man. The deodorant became stronger and stronger. I noticed it was coming from upstairs so I went there to find out where the smell was coming from.
It was upstairs in the bathroom. As I went into the bathroom. I knew it was coming from outside in the front garden, and out of the garden.
Kirstin






3 Comments Add your own
1. Cornhill | November 24th, 2007 at 8:31 pm
Hi Kirstin Good story .It was cool!. cya soon
cya l8ter Ashleigh
2. ashleigh | December 21st, 2007 at 11:21 am
Hey Kirstin.,Great story you shoud be an author when you grow up.The story was fabby!.Cya soon your bff Ashleigh
3. mystery.Legendary | February 14th, 2008 at 3:05 pm
amazing!
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