The Sore Loser
November 21st, 2007
I came to the house, the door was wide open. When I went in there was a golf club missing and when I went to the master bedroom I saw a missing trophy and the missing golf club with bits of blood on the golf stick with a trail leading to cupboard with a hand sticking out of it. When I went back down I saw a bit of The Sun written ‘DEAD’. When I went to the kitchen I saw a box. When I walked near it, I knew it was a bomb so I quickly escaped from the house and after few minutes the house blow up.
By Dylan & Sebastian
Entry Filed under: Schools, St Machar Primary, Writing
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1. Jenny | November 21st, 2007 at 9:16 pm
I am glad you managed to escape! Some great descriptions and clues - hope you keep writing and tell me more.
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