Comments on: Things that go bump in the night !!!!!! http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/things-that-go-bump-in-the-night The Reading Bus Blog features the writing of the community of Reading Bus users in Aberdeen, Scotland. Wed, 23 May 2012 03:27:56 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Russell http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/things-that-go-bump-in-the-night#comment-10264 Russell Mon, 25 Jun 2007 00:13:37 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=592#comment-10264 I was also gripped by the start, Max. I liked the way the stroy developed from such a calm beginning and then took a sinister turn, and then another. The whole story had a great pace There was some nice phrases. I particularly liked <blockquote>buble of curiosity</blockquote> I've a bubble of curiosity as to what happens next. The last paragraph confused me a bit. I was also gripped by the start, Max. I liked the way the stroy developed from such a calm beginning and then took a sinister turn, and then another. The whole story had a great pace

There was some nice phrases. I particularly liked

buble of curiosity

I’ve a bubble of curiosity as to what happens next. The last paragraph confused me a bit.

]]> By: Jenny http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/things-that-go-bump-in-the-night#comment-10235 Jenny Sun, 24 Jun 2007 19:30:37 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=592#comment-10235 Very gripping start to an exciting story. I hope you are going to write more so we know what happens. Don't forget about punctuation - in the last paragraph I think you need a few more full stops to make it easier to read. Looking forward to reading more. Very gripping start to an exciting story. I hope you are going to write more so we know what happens. Don’t forget about punctuation - in the last paragraph I think you need a few more full stops to make it easier to read. Looking forward to reading more.

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